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28.6.07

Half Lived

The burning cigarette gave warmth to her body from the inside. The drizzling rain sent a cool breeze across the world. Everything was three shades darker than normal. Greens were greener and grays grayer. The heart was ten shades bluer.

Take in the smoke, let out the tears. The ashes blew away in a whirl to another land. She watched every particle move away from her. Sitting at the window sill she could feel death twenty four floors down. The thought of it caused a wry smile across her pale face.

She left the half finished cigarette to rest on the ashtray. In a fraction of a second she leapt out of the window abandoning the four walled room.

7 comments:

Rohan said...

now this is what i say is awesome...
loved the way its written
just amazing!

it truly is.. cant find words at this moment.. great!!!!!!!

White Shadow said...

pleasantly disturbing....



well written...


Keep 'em coming!

mistsonthesea said...

very dark....very short
great piece.
love ur style of writing!

Anonymous said...

Why are u so dark in ur heart?!!!

Anonymous said...

Just Kidding. I LOVE IT!!!

Ahmed said...

Thanks to everyone above :)
@ driver on kart 39: May I know which of the drivers are you?

Gauthaman Koyamparambath said...

Nice.....As someone said above pleasantly disturbing....